Process Analysis, Kirsten Daykin Written Comm. Robert Burke
11/06/2013
Process analysis for USA Geography and Scenery's topic
“Are you prepared for your journey?”
Failure to plan is planning to fail.
As
simple as this sounds it is true and very serious when you travel. The
precarious situations you can find yourself in would be dangerous, risky,
vulnerable and life threatening. Stranded on a highway at 3am in bad weather
and you have no cell phone. Cell phones have made our lives much safer and even
now we have On Star road service and such other services. But let’s just say for
an instance you are in a dead zone with no signal, this happens in many places
even in highly populated areas but remotely it can be life threatening. What
would you do? Place your flashers on, maybe open your engine hood to show
trouble to oncoming traffic and hope for help from local authorities. If you
have mechanical skills and tools you would be more apt to get out and attempt
to resolve your problems. Keeping extra fuel, oil, anti-freeze, extra battery
and lights on hand is also a plus. Keeping blankets, road flares, food and
water is also to your advantage. Even simple things like letting someone know
where you are or going to be at any time so when you don’t arrive they will
call for help for you. When you live in a rural farm area you know the value of
having a network of friends who watch and wait for you regularly. If you or
someone you know is elderly than you know how vital it can be.
In the beginning of a trip to let’s say the
mountains and you are traveling by car or RV or camper, is your vehicle road
ready? Is it strong enough to make the trip? Have you packed or over packed
your mule to the brink? Many of us do not consider these questions until it’s
too late and the journey has already begun. Before you even take the map out of
the glove box, you should be at the garage talking to your mechanic. One of the
first things to know is, is your engine road worthy? Is your vehicle road
worthy? Be sure to have everything properly inspected and all servicing done
such as oil, transmission oil, radiator coolant as well as wheels and brakes,
tires and grease. Being diligent to your cars performance will make all the
difference in your success in traveling. When you are going to an extreme
climate and difficult driving terrain, these precautions may save your life.
Is your vehicle strong enough to do the work
you intend it to? If you have a V-6 engine and you have loaded the car up to
the max with say a trailer and the maximum load on the trailer is at the limit
of your trailer hitches weight limit, you are asking for trouble especially if
you are headed for the mountains but more specifically your engine will be
exhausted and sure to fail if it is at the limits of what it can do. Be sure to
know your towing capacity and your weight limits should be well below the
maximum. Do not expect your vehicle to do what it is not designed to do. If you
are looking for fuel efficiency and economy then that’s what you will get but
don’t be a pack mule ready for a break down. Climbing rough terrain on a
mountainside your vehicle will be put through a lot of punishment and one
common problem is the transmission of a vehicle it will overheat and fail. The
other common problem is the brakes as they too can overheat and fail, the two
things you don’t want to face when climbing or ascending a mountain range.
Have you packed your luggage and supplies
right? If you have got everything all jammed into the back of your minivan and
the top rack is loaded with the camping supplies, well you might reconsider how
much weight you have put on your axles and springs. Your suspension is also
very important to your safety. How many passengers are you carrying is also a
weight factor. Being top heavy and driving through heavy wind is a serious
problem combined with driving through a mountain range can be a serious
problem. From my own personal experience I have had to replace a vehicle in the
mountain range because of break down, I have had to make several very expensive
repairs to transmissions and brakes as well as had broken suspension at a
critical time on the mountainside. I have hauled U-Haul’s over the mountain
with a V-6 motor and will not try it again. What was a very good condition
vehicle was completely worn out after the trip across the mountains. What should have cost $1,500 to $2,000 in
turn cost $4,000. If you’re not prepared and don’t have that kind of money you
may very well find yourself stranded. Preparedness is the key and being
realistic about the job at hand is vital. Once you do know what to expect don’t
ignore it. If your vehicle is unsafe don’t chance it. If your load is unsafe unload
it. Having good travel insurance is vital or even a credit card with a
borrowing limit. Being safe is the message here and when traveling with family
or others it is also their safety as well. The one thing I do not suggest is
traveling alone, the risk factors are very high especially with crime and other
hazards you may encounter. If you are determined to get to the other side of
the mountain and you are not ready for a very scary ride up or down the
mountain, go around it. It can be done and will save you a bad ordeal and much
safer although it is a variance in distance, time and costs it may be a better
alternative.
In conclusion; Many people feel at home when
they are out and about traveling and you may as well it is what America has
become very used to doing and having all of the creature comforts have become
quite vital in our safety yet when the comforts do not work or help us we can
be very helpless in a dangerous situation. Many people carry emergency
equipment and supplies to help others on the roadside. It is something that can
save lives. Even if you don’t have a lot of money or all the bells and whistles
on board you should still have an alternative and a network of people you can
count on.
The thesis I believe has to do with planning, not in the first paragraph, but in the title? Also, in first paragraph, I do know that you should never start a sentence with but. Also first paragraph maybe a comma after tools. Second paragraph first sentence seems to run on. try adding a couple commas and a period in different spots to see what works the best. Same with the beginning of third paragraph. Last paragraph confused me a bit. Not sure where a period should go but pretty sure a couple would work, also maybe just a comma after conclusion?
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